buoyant breeze beckons
eagle exits empty nest—
soaring in silence
Author’s Notes:
Form: 5-7-5 Poem (5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 5 in the third)
The natural metaphor of an eagle’s first flight as a symbol of personal development and the bravery to embrace new beginnings served as the inspiration for this poem.
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Be the Eagle.
That is indeed the message of this poem. Thanks.
I love alliteration. I think it elevates any form, and perhaps short forms more than most.
B/B/B
E/E/E/E
S/I/S
Can’t do much better than that, and none of it is forced!
Very nice.
I’m following that eagle into the new year. Thanks, K.