echoes of your laugh—
rooms now silent, shadows long;
laugh echoes, tears fall.
Author’s Notes:
Form: 5-7-5
For a twist on the classic 5-7-5 poem structure, a “mirror” technique is used, where the first line is “mirrored” as the third line, with a slight variation that changes the meaning or perspective.
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Yes this is true life to someone who has lost a loved one.
The image is perfect…