Jake had dreamed of what it would feel like to take the winning shot. He imagined the moment, the roar of the crowd urging him on.
A silent promise hung in the air.
The tension intensified as he gripped the ball, his uncalloused hands laced with adrenaline. His dad’s encouraging words echoed softly, warming his heart. Conquering his breath, he took the shot.
The ball rolled around the rim and fell through the makeshift basketball goal, fashioned from an old peach basket. Somehow, Jake knew he would never be as tall as when he was sitting on his dad’s shoulders.
Author’s Notes:
Historically, the very first basketball games used peach baskets as hoops, which is a nod to the sport’s origins.
Form: Flash Fiction (100 words)
Flash fiction refers to very short stories that typically range from a few words to 1,000 words or so, The key characteristic of flash fiction is its brevity, demanding conciseness in storytelling while still offering character development, plot, and a conclusive or impactful ending. It’s well-suited to the fast-paced, digital world where readers may prefer quick, yet meaningful, literary experiences.
Unexpected ending made this one fun to read.
Thank you, Jane.